Comments on: Bani‌ Adam Azaye Yek‌ Digarand http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/2009/02/bani%e2%80%8c-adam-azaye-yek%e2%80%8c-digarand/ Beautiful Farsi Writings Thu, 24 Jun 2010 04:57:13 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Shahram http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/2009/02/bani%e2%80%8c-adam-azaye-yek%e2%80%8c-digarand/comment-page-1/#comment-195 Shahram Wed, 19 May 2010 17:00:40 +0000 http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/?p=30#comment-195 Having the same rhyme for the last two verses weakens the structure. Still, it's the best translation of this poem that I have read so far, and I don't have a better one to show! Thanks! :) Having the same rhyme for the last two verses weakens the structure. Still, it’s the best translation of this poem that I have read so far, and I don’t have a better one to show! Thanks! :)

]]> By: elika http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/2009/02/bani%e2%80%8c-adam-azaye-yek%e2%80%8c-digarand/comment-page-1/#comment-141 elika Thu, 18 Feb 2010 10:36:48 +0000 http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/?p=30#comment-141 The first line of the translation is wrong. banie adam azaye yekdegarand. ''The children of Adam are limbs to each other, having been created of one essence and soul'' Adam is not in the meaning af human but the first human ADAM. The first line of the translation is wrong.
banie adam azaye yekdegarand.
”The children of Adam are limbs to each other, having been created of one essence and soul”
Adam is not in the meaning af human but the first human ADAM.

]]> By: Fari http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/2009/02/bani%e2%80%8c-adam-azaye-yek%e2%80%8c-digarand/comment-page-1/#comment-123 Fari Tue, 10 Nov 2009 13:35:23 +0000 http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/?p=30#comment-123 This is how I read it: Human beings are members of a whole, In creation: of one essence and soul. If one member is afflicted with pain, The other members uneasy remain. If you have no sympathy for human pain, The title 'human' you cannot claim. This is how I read it:

Human beings are members of a whole,
In creation: of one essence and soul.
If one member is afflicted with pain,
The other members uneasy remain.
If you have no sympathy for human pain,
The title ‘human’ you cannot claim.

]]> By: Lili http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/2009/02/bani%e2%80%8c-adam-azaye-yek%e2%80%8c-digarand/comment-page-1/#comment-114 Lili Thu, 24 Sep 2009 18:39:47 +0000 http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/?p=30#comment-114 Very nice translation. I will use it on a community website I'm making with your permission. Thanks. Very nice translation. I will use it on a community website I’m making with your permission. Thanks.

]]> By: Hooshang http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/2009/02/bani%e2%80%8c-adam-azaye-yek%e2%80%8c-digarand/comment-page-1/#comment-91 Hooshang Wed, 22 Jul 2009 04:32:21 +0000 http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/?p=30#comment-91 I have translated many Persian,Hindi,Turkish etc to English.I am very delighted the way you have translated Saadi's THE MOST important poem.I am proud of your talent.I wish every body read this poem before leaving home just to remind us that We all ARE one body of humans and elements.We got to cooperate one another in every aspects of daily life without greed and selfishness. I have translated many Persian,Hindi,Turkish etc to English.I am very delighted the way you have translated Saadi’s THE MOST important poem.I am proud of your talent.I wish every body read this poem before leaving home just to remind us that We all ARE one body of humans and elements.We got to cooperate one another in every aspects of daily life without greed and selfishness.

]]> By: manije mirdamad http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/2009/02/bani%e2%80%8c-adam-azaye-yek%e2%80%8c-digarand/comment-page-1/#comment-86 manije mirdamad Mon, 22 Jun 2009 02:29:15 +0000 http://www.farsicalligraphy.net/?p=30#comment-86 I am not content with the ranslation I am not content with the ranslation

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